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We will
discuss here how to enhance the chance of publication of your manuscript by listing
the essential requirements of each section of the manuscript. This demonstration
is only for manuscripts written to describe the results of a research study. Manuscripts
written as reviews, case reports, short reports have different styles.
- First, set up the
word-processor
- Title Page
- Summary/Abstract
- Introduction
- Methods
- Results
- Discussion
- Acknowledgment
- References
- Tables
- Figures
and Figure Legends
The submitted manuscript should be accompanied
by a cover letter (press here for an
example provided by Word-Medex). Finally, we offer few tip on:
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Setting
Up the word-processor to type the manuscript |
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Manuscripts that describe the results
of a research study are usually composed of the following sections: Title Page,
Summary, Introduction, Methods, Results, Discussion, Acknowledgment, References,
Tables and Figure legends. Before you start typing the manuscript, set up
your word-processing file to the following format features:
- Type the entire manuscript double-spaced,
with 2.5 cm (1") top, bottom, right and left margins.
- Each section of the manuscript should
begin on a new page.
- Use a medium size font, e.g. Times
size 13, Helvetica size 12, or Courier size 12.
- Set up a header or footer on every
page containing the page number, and if you prefer, the name of the first author,
followed by et al. (example, Kawakami et al., Page 1).
Word-Medex has prepared a website demonstrating how to set up a page number
header for your manuscript. Click here to go to
that site.
- Use TAB at the start of each paragraph
throughout the manuscript.
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Title
Page |
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- The title page should contain:
- The title of the article, which
should be concise but informative. It should describe the main findings or the
purpose of the study. Spell out symbols rather than use symbol fonts, e.g. beta
instead of b.
- First name, middle initial, and
last name of each author, with highest academic degree(s) and institutional affiliations.
- Name of department(s) and institution(s)
to which the work should be attributed.
- A short running head or foot line
of no more than 40 characters (count letters and spaces).
- Source(s) of support in the form
of grants, equipment, drugs, or all of these.
- Disclaimers, if any.
- Name and address of the author responsible
for correspondence about the manuscript, including phone and fax numbers and e-mail
address, if available.
- If different from (7) above, provide
the name and address of the author to whom requests for reprints should be addressed
or statement that reprints will not be available from the author.
- A header containing the surname
of the first author followed by "et al., Page " and the page number. Word-Medex
has prepared a website demonstrating how to set up a page number header for your
manuscript. Click here to see that
site.
Who should be listed as an author.
Each author should have participated sufficiently in the work to take public responsibility
for the content. Authorship credit should be based only on substantial contributions
to:
- Conception and design, or analysis
and interpretation of data.
- Drafting the article or revising
it critically for important intellectual content.
- Final approval of the version to
be published.
Conditions (a), (b), and (c) must all
be met. Participation solely in the acquisition of funding or the collection of
data does not justify authorship. General supervision of the research group is
not sufficient for authorship. Any part of an article critical to its main conclusions
must be the responsibility of at least one author. The order of authorship should
be a joint decision of the coauthors. The name of the head of the research group
usually appears as the last author
Editors may require authors to justify the assignment of authorship. Increasingly,
multicenter trials are attributed to a corporate author.
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Summary/Abstract
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The second page should carry
an abstract of the following style:
- It should not be more than 150 words
for unstructured abstracts or 250 words for structured abstracts (those that contain
the following sub-headings: Background/Aims/Purpose, Methods, Results, Conclusions).
- The abstract should provide a brief
background, state the purpose(s) of the study or investigation, basic methods
(selection of study subjects or laboratory animals; observational and analytical
methods), main results (give specific data and their statistical significance,
if possible), and the principal conclusions.
- Emphasize new and important aspects
of the study.
- Below the abstract provide, and
identify as such, 3 to 10 key words or short phrases that will assist indexers
in cross-indexing the article and may be published with the abstract. Use terms
from the Medical Subject Headings (MeSH) list of Index Medicus.
- Do not cite reference(s) in this
section.
- Define all abbreviations used in
the Summary.
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Introduction |
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- Summarize what is known about the
topic of the manuscript
- Do not make an exhaustive literature
review. Give only strictly pertinent references.
- Do not include data or conclusions
from the work being reported.
- Provide a statement of objectives
and research plan.
- The use of present and past verbs
is allowed.
- Avoid referring to your work only.
- End this section by describing the
rationale for the study or observation, followed by a brief statement describing
the most important finding of the study.
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Materials
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- Start with what you first did to
answer your question and end by describing what you did last.
- Divide into subsections if long.
- Provide enough information to enable
another investigator to replicate the work.
- The most important subsection is
the protocol, which consists of:
- The independent variable (manipulated
variable).
- The dependent variable (measured
variable).
- All controls.
- Describe your selection of the observational
or experimental subjects (patients or laboratory animals, including controls)
clearly.
- Identify the methods, apparatus
(manufacturer's name and address in parentheses), and procedures in sufficient
detail to allow other workers to reproduce the results. Avoid the use of "the
method is described elsewhere ..".
- Give references to established methods,
including statistical methods (see below); provide references and brief descriptions
for methods that have been published but are not well known; describe new or substantially
modified methods, give reasons for using them, and evaluate 'their limitations.
- Identify precisely all drugs and
chemicals used, including generic name(s), dose(s), and route(s) of administration.
- Ethics. When reporting experiments
on human subjects, indicate whether the procedures followed were in accordance
with the ethical standards of the responsible committee on human experimentation
(institutional or regional) or with the Helsinki Declaration of 1975, as revised
in 1983. Do not use patients' names, initials, or hospital numbers, especially
in illustrative material. When reporting "experiments on animals, indicate whether
the institution's or the National Research Council's guide for, or any national
law on, the care and use of laboratory animals was followed.
- Statistical methods: (see also Word-Medex
link on Statistical Analysis)
- Describe statistical methods with
enough detail to enable a knowledgeable reader with access to the original data
to verify the reported results.
- Avoid sole reliance on statistical
hypothesis testing, such as the use of P values, which fails to convey important
quantitative information.
- Give details about randomization.
- Describe the methods for and success
of any blinding of observations.
- References for study design and
statistical methods should be to standard works (with pages stated) when possible
rather than to papers in which the designs or methods were originally reported.
- Specify any general-use computer
programs used.
- Put general description of methods
in the Methods' section.
- Avoid nontechnical uses of technical
terms in statistics, such as "random" (which implies a randomizing device), "normal,"
"significant correlations," and "sample." Define statistical terms, abbreviations,
and most symbols.
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Results
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- This section is the core of the
paper. Make a straightforward presentation of the data.
- Describe the most important results
first, followed by less important results.
- Do not compare the present data
with previously published results.
- Avoid using descriptive words (markedly,
greatly, prominent, etc...).
- Statistical analysis: (see
also Word-Medex link on Statistical
Analysis)
- Adhere to describing comparisons
as significant or not-significant.
- Avoid using different levels of
statistical significance. A p < 0.05 is sufficient to convince the reader
to the presence of a significant difference, rather than cluttering the text with
different p values (e.g., p<0.01, p<0.001, p<0.0001,
etc).
- Give numbers of observations.
- When possible, quantify findings
and present them with appropriate indicators of measurement error or uncertainty
(such as confidence intervals). Describe whether the number that follows the mean
value is SD or SEM.
- Present results in logical sequence
in the text, tables, and illustrations.
- Either present data that support
the results or cite figures or tables that present data. Do not duplicate data
in text and tables or illustrations. Use graphs as an alternative to tables with
many entries.
- Check that for every result in this
section there is a method in the Methods section
- Emphasize or summarize only important
observations.
- Include test and control data.
- Report losses to observation (such
as dropouts from a clinical trial).
- Report treatment complications.
- Restrict tables and figures to those
needed to explain the argument of the paper and to assess its support.
- Refer to the Figures and Tables
in the text, discussing the information provided.
- Do not use abbreviations in the
figures, if possible. Expand all abbreviations in the figure legend.
- Figures
- Illustrations must be good-quality,
unmounted glossy prints, usually 127 x 173 mm (5x7 in), but no larger than 203
x 254 mm (8 x 10 in).
- Simplify Figures.
- Check that numbers in Figures match
the information provided in the text and Abstract.
- Expand all abbreviations.
- The legend should tell the reader
about the most important thing displayed in the Figure.
- Avoid using more than 4-5 figures.
- If several Figures look the same,
group them into one Figure.
- Type of Figures:
- Realistic or schematic illustrations.
- Photographs or drawing of experimental
setup.
- Micrographs.
- Polygraph recordings.
- Gel electrophoretograms.
- Graphs:
- X-Y plots. In most circumstances,
there is no need to include the regression equation, but provide the regression
coefficient and p value of the regression.
- Bar graphs. Use different
patterns for bars of different groups, e.g., open and closed bars.
- Lines graph
- 3-D graphs
- Tables Word-Medex
has prepared a website demonstrating how to format tables in your manuscript.
Click here to go that site.
- Use a descriptive title.
- Avoid using long Tables.
- Expand all abbreviations in the
legend.
- Do not use more than one level of
statistical comparisons. If this becomes necessary, do not use multiples of *,
e.g., *, **, ***, ****, but rather use different symbols.
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Discussion
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- First state the answer to the question
placed at the end of the Introduction.
- Provide evidence in support of the
answer.
- Describe complications
- Describe conflicting results and
reasons for such differences.
- Establish the newness of your findings.
- Limitations of the methods, weaknesses
in study design, validity of assumptions.
- End with a reinforcing message.
- Discuss whether these results are
new, unique, similar or different to previously published results.
- The use of past and present verbs
is allowed.
- Include in the Discussion
the implications of the findings and their limitations, including implications
for future research.
- Relate the observations to other
relevant studies.
- Link the conclusions with the goals
of the study but avoid unqualified statements and conclusions not completely supported
by your data.
- Avoid claiming priority and alluding
to work that has not been completed.
- State new hypotheses when warranted,
but clearly label them as such.
- Recommendations, when appropriate,
may be included.
- Always end this section with a concluding
summary or the future direction of research.
- Do not:
- Begin the Discussion
with a summary of the results or a repeat of the Introduction section.
- Begin the Discussion
with secondary information.
- Use subtitles.
- Write a long Discussion.
The length should not exceed one fifth of the total text material.
- Make too many speculations.
- Make an exhaustive review of the
literature. Avoid using more than 25 citations.
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Acknowledgement |
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- Acknowledge people who contributed
to the completion the study and preparation of the manuscript.
- Contributions that need acknowledging
but do not justify authorship, such as general support by a departmental chair.
- Acknowledgments of technical help.
- Acknowledgments of financial and
material support, specifying the nature of the support.
- Financial relationships that may
pose a conflict of interest.
- Persons who have contributed intellectually
to the paper but whose contributions do not justify authorship may be named and
their function or contribution described-for example, "scientific adviser," "critical
review of study proposal ...... data collection," or "participation in clinical
trial." Such persons must have given their permission to be named.
- Authors are responsible for obtaining
written permission from persons acknowledged by name, because readers may infer
their endorsement of the data and conclusions.
- Technical help should be acknowledged
in a paragraph separate from those acknowledging other contributions.
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References
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- Check the style required by the
selected journal.
- Numbering of references depends
on the journal selected for submission of the manuscript. Some journals require
numbering the references consecutively in the order in which they are first mentioned
in the text. Other journals require listing the references alphabetically based
on the surname of the first author.
- Citation of the references in the
text of the manuscript also differs from one journal to other. For example, some
journals require identification of references in text, tables, and legends by
Arabic numerals in parentheses, e.g. (1) or (1, 4), or (3-9, 11, 16-18). In
the latter case DO NOT use (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,11,16,17,18). However, other journals
require the use of the name of the first author followed by the year of publication,
e.g., (Richard et al., 1991; Smith et al., 1993), (Richard and Smith
1995).
- References cited only in tables
or in legends to figures should be numbered in accordance with a sequence established
by the first identification in the text of the particular table or figure.
- The format of the reference may
also vary depending on the journal selected for submission of the manuscript.
The most common formats are:
- Issa FG, Morrison D, Hadjuk E, Iyer
R, Feroah T, Remmers J. Digital monitoring of sleep disordered breathing using
snoring sound and arterial oxygen saturation. Am Rev Respir Dis 1993;148:1023-1029.
or
- Issa, F.G., D. Morrison, E. Hadjuk,
R. Iyer, T. Feroah, and J. Remmers. Digital monitoring of sleep disordered breathing
using snoring sound and arterial oxygen saturation. Am. Rev. Respir. Dis. 148:1023-1029
(1993).
- Avoid the use of abstracts as references.
- "unpublished observations" and "personal
communications" may not be used as references, although references to written,
not oral, communications may be inserted (in parentheses) in the text.
- Include in the references papers
accepted but not yet published designate the journal and add "In press".
- Information from manuscripts submitted
but not yet accepted should be cited in the text as (unpublished observations).
- The references must be verified
by the author(s) against the original documents.
- Word-Medex provides a comprehensive
list showing examples of correct forms of references.
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How
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The most important step is a good scientific experimental design.
- Write a manuscript that describes
a comprehensible story with a clear message.
- Select the most appropriate journal
for publication of your manuscript (a clinical journal for clinical studies, research-oriented
journal for animal studies). If you do not know all journals that publish articles
in your field, then visit the Institute
for Scientific Information (ISI) for a complete list of all medical/bioscience
journals.
- Read the Instructions for Authors
of the selected journal. If you cannot obtain a copy of the journal, then visit
the web site of that journal, if available, and search for the Instructions
for Authors. For a list of some of the journals that maintain web sites containing
Instructions for Authors, visit our list of medical
journals.
- Seek the help of a scientific editor.
Scientific editing improves the readability of the article and diminishes the
chance of rejection by the reviewers. The editor should be preferably a scientific
individual and not English-language editor only (see Word-Medex
Pty Ltd, for example). The editor should also be reliable and provide a fast and
confidential service.
- Badly written manuscripts are those
that do not tell a clear story and only describe overwhelming details about what
others have done or found rather than describe and discuss the major findings
of the study.
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